Thomas Ray

I like this, the first half especially.

I'm worried about Everli....

Lemmie just hold my thoughts until I finish the next part.

I refuse. I refuse. No. This is no. I want more Everli.
THIS IS NOT OKAY.
I want Everli back.

This is easily the most emotional part. Only the end is rushed, and even that is fine.
Oh, I love this story so much.

THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE SUBMISSION FROM YOU

I won't ask for more. I've loved it!

I really think this could be an amazing song. It's not perfect, but I think all it needs to be a song is a tune!