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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

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Black Gloves by Kaprie Keeling

Wow, that took a turn. I love it. I can't help but wonder what happens to them next. I do feel like the writing could use a little more showing than telling, but the characters feel individual, and I like all three of them, and while it hints at a larger story, leaving it here still satisfies me.
My thoughts are all over the place right now...

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Angels (Part 1) by TheForgotten

Angels..... Hmm.... I like this.

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A Moment of Power by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

I'm not sure what to say, but... I recommend. I favorite. This is favorite-worthy

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Missing the Thought of You by LeCat127

*applause*

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What We Didn't Have by

I like this a lot. I love when poems tell stories.

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Mother Says She Wants Me Dead by AaronTheRocker

It's brave to share this opinion. Looking at the reviews is kind of funny because most of them are people agreeing with you, and those reviews are downvoted to -4 or some such number, and it just amuses me that they're completely silent but still feel spiteful and angry enough to do that.
Guys, if you're reading this, just learn to deal with other people having and expressing opinions that are different than yours.

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Natural Causes by T.D Calvin

WAY better than I expected going into it. This is amazing.

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