Reviews Given
Oooooo! It got gooder! I wonder what happens next! Have a good day!
This is so true, we all feel this way when this happens to us, I love how you rhyme and gave it detail as well, keep up the work! Enjoy your day.
The story is very good! Keep up the work! Have a nice day!
So creepy! Keep up the work!
I hear people saying this is real, if this is real bless their hearts and I hope your okay, this was a good, also sad and scary, keep up the work! Have a nice day, be safe!
Imagine being in this situation right now, what would you do? I know I would’ve kept calm, and covered the girls mouth too, and asked the teacher if we can barricade the door, because who would just lock it like they ain’t gonna bust the door down? But this was a good story! Keep up the work! Have a good day!
This was a good story! I also understand the struggle of making a story yourself love then thinking it’s not good at all, but yeah, this is a good story! Keep up the work of writing, have a nice day, be safe.
This story is based on true events in the real world, this Abuse is very bad and sad, I feel bad to all those people out there being abused, I really enjoyed this story though, and hope the two made it out good and the dad goes to prison, this story is awesome and sad, keep up the work, peace.