United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
How you kept adding onto it was amazing. It started from more of the simple stuff and added to deeper and more personal levels.
Nicely done.
Music. The one thing that soothes and destroys a soul that is a piece of art.
Finely done.
It's just the innocence of time.
Love that you brought the ocean aspect and life into one writing. Life is just as vast as the ocean with the known and unknown.
You've made this story into like a heat-of-the-moment emotion inside the mind of the man and didn't give much detail as how it was moving so fast and it makes sense as for how the man is acting.
Love your works.
Work of art that is full of heart.
On the edge of my chair.
Very well done for a slow story.