Ghost

Well I have to ask: Has this happened to you?
It was well written and flows well. If I were to change anything it would probably be to break it up some,although thats me and its a minor thing.Great Job!

Why are you apologizing? You have nothing to apologize for. This is well written possibly a few minor things here and there to change and you get the point across that you're lost and broken. Good job.
Slightly off topic note:
Your author note wasn't needed. If you were going to simply erase it you wouldn't have submitted it in the first place.

As grim as that message is its the truth. Those who do good always seem to end up with a shorter life. It was well written.

Please do continue. Your story is an interesting one and I would like to hear more.
I'm reminded of my self in the past and now and can relate entirely to this.
Keep writing!

This is surprisingly calming, comforting, and vivid. This is amazing. I can see and hear what you describe which is rare for me to do. You have made a story that is just amazingly descriptive.
Great job with this and I cant wait to see what you write next

I enjoyed reading this. decent flow and little problems with reading it, couple of spelling/grammer things I noticed,
Was the way you worded line 24 going top to bottom or line 25 going bottom to top intentional? I had to reread it a few times to make sure I read it right
Also I understand what you are talking about
Great job and keep writing!

It was written well, there were things I'd change but they aren't major.
Seriously though, you really nailed it in the author notes. People don't think you would hide something from them, let alone hide something like depression, suicidal thoughts and actions, etc. We ignore people's problems unless it benefits us to know about them or its perceived you are on the fine line of committing suicide or not. Unless you're dying nobody cares is all I've seen, that alone is depressing.
I might have said too much, so recap:
Good job on the writing and you nailed what people really ought to do in the author notes. Keep up the writing, and I hope to see more soon.

I found this funny because it's true. People find out you are autistic they automatically think you are different. Somehow you have to be treated slightly differently just because you have autism. It might be because of fear of what those with autism could do.

You did a great job and I hope you keep writing.