Ghost

Well that is one way to look at depression and I can agree.

1) That was written well, nothing grammatically wrong as far as i can tell.
2) I can completely relate to this story
Good story keep writing!


3) I sort of noticed this while reading but, add a c to Iares to get Icares which describes that friend and switch the k in miko to an n for mino which describes that friend.
Just something i noticed.

1 I understand how you were feeling.( Hopefully you don't have this pain in the future.)
2 Whats with the Spanish in the author notes?
3 There are several spelling mistakes.
Enjoy the times when you don't feel like (insert negative feeling here), for those times are a small piece of happiness.

I completely agree that grades mean nothing on a persons worth. This is a great poem
Funnily enough I was planning to write a poem on this...

During your free time? This is really good,the pacing of it is really nice cause you don't need to think much and it flows really smooth.Great job!

It is great,for changes that I personally would make it would be erasing the third line. That is just me though and for 12 years old this is really good. Keep it up!

For the story: it is great! Not much else to say there
For your issue if it still is a thing: Why do you hate yourself? I won't tell you think happy you've tried but attempt to find the source. It sorta seems like it comes from comparing your self to others. Regardless great story!

Well... I guess first is this true?
If so thank god for people like you
If not you are an extremely descriptive writer. I felt nearly everything you said and I have really bad empathy for others.
Regardless of weather or not this story is true you did a really great job and I hope you are doing well now and in the future.