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Wow! This is beautiful. Especially the moral at the end. Keep up the great work!
It's so beautifully written! I can really picture and I can feel what you feel about this person. Awesome job and keep it up!
Holy crap. Is this real? Please don't say this is real. I'm so sorry!
This is sooooo good! It's describing about being alive but now living your life. Does that even make sense? I don't think so. Anyway, great story! Keep it up! :)
My own grandmother passed away only a few months ago. I know how you feel. Death is the most painful torture.
Anyway, great work! Keep it up!
In fact, I am reading this! And no, not all the credit goes to me! This is a beautiful story, yet sad. As for ideas, there's another "Writing Prompt I'm writing right now! You can totally take ideas for there. :P Have fun writing and I will look forward to reading your stories! :D
I really liked House On Mango Street, by the way! Anyway, this is a great vignette! Keep up the good work.
This was an interesting read! Great story, even though it takes some understanding at the beginning. And also, I'm glad you could get ideas from me! Overall, great work. :D