𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

this rhyming! it spoke right to my heart. keep at it! i can't wait to see what you write next

<3 <3 <3 I can really feel your emotions in this one. I'm sorry you went through this, and I'm here for you. :)

oh my word. this story took my breath away. the sadness and eloquence of the words is just beautiful. keep writing! :D

i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D

ahhh! i love it so far! can't wait to read more :D

This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your words do a great job of conveying these complex emotions. If you need someone to talk out your emotions with, reach out any time. :)

I love this! Your writing style is beautiful, and the twist at the end is so sad but it brings the whole story together. Great job :)

Whoa! Love this! The world needs a hope-filled message like this, especially during this year