𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

interesting. it'll be fun to see where this story goes. great job so far :D

whoa. i really relate to this. i feel like everyone needs a reminder that their problems are just as important as everyone elses, and that its okay to ask for help. great job! :D

i like where your journey into poetry is going. your rhyming is different from anyone else's i've seen. great job! :D

<3 <3 <3 I can really feel your emotions in this one. I'm sorry you went through this, and I'm here for you. :)

oh my word. this story took my breath away. the sadness and eloquence of the words is just beautiful. keep writing! :D

i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D

ahhh! i love it so far! can't wait to read more :D

This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your words do a great job of conveying these complex emotions. If you need someone to talk out your emotions with, reach out any time. :)