𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

this is so sweet. i really enjoyed how you gradually revealed details about the main character's best friend and brother along the way until you reached the end. great job :D

oh my worddd. this was beautiful. i love how the words flow and carry the reader along with them. great job with this one :)

Nice work! It'll be interesting to see where this goes :)

please write more! your writing style is beautiful

AHH! The intrigue! Can't wait for the next part. :D

This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Your words do a great job of conveying these complex emotions. If you need someone to talk out your emotions with, reach out any time. :)

ahhh! i love it so far! can't wait to read more :D

i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D