Despicable_Moi

I loved your use of the quote in the beginning... I can tell that this is only the beginning of a powerful story. Nice job, and I look forward to reading more of your writings! :)

I love it! The ending is so sweet. Nice job! <3

Wowza. The last line gave me chills. Nice job!

Beautiful! Your words flowed effortlessly, which reminded me of how songs are sung.
Our lives aren't truly ours. To take one's own life is to take it from the world and those who love us. I think your words showed this perfectly.

Chills. That was spooky and I loved it! Nice job, and I hope to read more of your future stories! :D

Wow! I love this so far! Great job!!! :)

I really like your use of words. I agree that it is imperative to the world that we make these necessary changes including, but not limited to, paradigm shifts. It is important that we make the foundations for a future where everyone is equal. Everyone deserves to be loved! <3

I love the description. This is a wonderful beginning. Nice job!