United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Nice story idea! I loved the detail put into it. If this is just how you were at the start, I can't wait to see how great of a writer you've become since then!
Idk why it's taken me this long to actually finish reading the parts you have out, but I love the plot so far! Your stories are really well written, and I look forward to reading more!!! :D
Niceee! The Prophecy Child has been found! :D
and I love the "Happy Kidnapping"
I picture all of the monsters as characters in a Tim Burton film; with the kind of clay-like looks, and it's awesome. Gray Eye really sounds like a guardian angel.
As always, I love your work! <3
Awww... so sweet. I hope they do love again. I love that your writing was easy to read, but if your open to constructive criticism, I'd recommend making some sentences a bit shorter. I also loved the "pumpy-umpy-umpkin" phrase! I've never heard that before, but it's sooo creative! I can't wait to read more of your creations! <3 :)
Awww! I loved that! You're a really good writer, and I can't wait to read more of what you write! :)
I like this idea! It's like Hunger Games, but for the mind. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Sweet! I loved it!!! <3