France • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I kinda liked at and kinda didn't like it.
It was indeed really short but it was a good series.
I kinda didn't like it!
Felt like there shuld be more and you know!!
Can't explain but overall I feel it should have been more interesting
XOXO
Sansid!
It was good... though I didn't enjoy that much and you could hv used more of pronouns than Steven!
Very well written @kamili...
loved it!
AGreed with both the reviewers too.
Hoping to see more like this!
:)
XOXO
Sansid!
Agreed IanG.... she is definitely making suspense.... I like when u mentioned that he wasn't a human...
I started thinking about it and I think that he should I guess be a spirit of her mom who has changed her appearance but then...
Xoxo,
Sansid
The story is amazing... I like it!
The opening was really cool... it actually draw my attention. I love the story and there meeting and stuff. I feel that u should write in more description that will make it more interesting and it will definitely draws more attention.
It creates a scene in the reader's mind.
Yes, I agree with @IanG... punctuation was an issue and there were some spelling mistakes also.
Overall, I have to say, you are great, dude! Keep it up!
XOXO,
Sansid
It was really beautiful!