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Can’t wait to see where this goes!!!

Very intriguing! A few grammatical errors, but those are easy to fix. Keep going, you're very talented!

This is great! You did rly good! I think you could be a bit more descriptive, though. When you wrote "they stopped hugging," I felt you could put a bit more into that. Maybe something along the lines of, "they immediately pulled away, giving nervous chuckles." Other than that, you did really, really well! Keep writing, you're going somewhere!

Very very intrigued. Can’t wait to see what happens next to this band of friends

Very entertaining! You have a few grammatical errors, such as using commas when necessary. If you used the names of the characters a bit more when they talked, it would make it more clear as to who is speaking. I think that's about it. You're really talented!

Can't wait to see where this is going, eek! You did a great job conveying that Georgie liked Shaydon. Keep writing, you're really good!

It was a really good story! Great job. I can't wait to read more!

I'm so sorry you felt this way! I'm glad to hear you're doing better though. I have to admit, I sort of suspected it. I have friends that deal with depression and I know how badly it can affect them. Stay strong! Even if covid never ends, we can still stick together. We're going out in public more and it's becoming less of an issue, sort of like the flu. It can be scary, but just know that we are all here for you. Keep writing, you have so much creative energy!