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I need to say this to every new person I meet... Keep up the great work!

I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!

It's so beautifully written! I can really picture and I can feel what you feel about this person. Awesome job and keep it up!

I can relate to this. Beautifully written!

Write more please! What happens next? The child needs some happiness in his life. Nice work!

So sweet! Please write more. This is is so interesting and keep up the good work.

Wow! This is beautiful. Especially the moral at the end. Keep up the great work!

My own grandmother passed away only a few months ago. I know how you feel. Death is the most painful torture.
Anyway, great work! Keep it up!