Despicable_Moi

Wow! I love this so far! Great job!!! :)

Beautiful! Your words flowed effortlessly, which reminded me of how songs are sung.
Our lives aren't truly ours. To take one's own life is to take it from the world and those who love us. I think your words showed this perfectly.

Wowza. The last line gave me chills. Nice job!

I loved your use of the quote in the beginning... I can tell that this is only the beginning of a powerful story. Nice job, and I look forward to reading more of your writings! :)

I love it! The ending is so sweet. Nice job! <3

Chills... I'm gonna have a hard time sleeping tonight. Nice job! :)

Wow, that really puts things into perspective. Nice job! It's really tragic about the island though.

Idk why it's taken me this long to actually finish reading the parts you have out, but I love the plot so far! Your stories are really well written, and I look forward to reading more!!! :D