Thomas Ray

This is pretty cool. Really good for a first poem.

The way you wrote this, especially the end, was so inspirational!

Really cool so far. The way it's written is very distinct, but if you did that on purpose, then well done. Either way, I'll read the rest.

Interesting. I really like the description of the demons.

I like this. It's told like a fairy tale in some ways, and I feel like you're leading up to something, which is one of the most important feelings to communicate in writing. I'll be reading the other prequels when you submit them.

This was written so well, I can't even....

Interesting narration, murders, friends, sadness...... I like this so far.

I love how willing you are to share what you believe. It's very cool.