Thomas Ray

I refuse. I refuse. No. This is no. I want more Everli.
THIS IS NOT OKAY.
I want Everli back.

This is easily the most emotional part. Only the end is rushed, and even that is fine.
Oh, I love this story so much.

THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE SUBMISSION FROM YOU

I won't ask for more. I've loved it!

I really think this could be an amazing song. It's not perfect, but I think all it needs to be a song is a tune!

I lean more toward it being..... A curse with possibilities.

I think it's vital to trust others as much as you want them to trust you. This is not meant to be an argument, I really like this.