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I love this, the format you wrote it in is perfect, its spell's everything out.. Keep writing!

Oh my god I cried. This story is amazing.. The cutting made my own wrist hurt.

I came across this story. I like it because it reminds me of my experience in that corner. I hope everything is good. I hope that the mental state is still stable.. thank you for sharing this story! I really did enjoy it.

Ok first.. I LOVE THIS! And second I swear I didn't steal the name Olive from you Lol.. Um I don't really think the story was rushed I enjoyed it being a bit quick but it filled me in on the story so it wasn't just jumping all over the place (Which I enjoyed). I really enjoyed this storyyy!

That was really cool! I'm jelly~ I hope I can write like that later on in life!!! :)

I really liked this excerpt from your story! It has a cool vibe to it...

I really liked this! And I hope someone someday show's you exactly what True Love is❤ Stay Safe!

I think it was really good, I had shivers after finishing. I think there was one part I didn't quite understand but other than that it was really good!